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My First Pie

This is about my first pie
Made by my first girlfriend
Great expectations
Not so great results
It became my last pie
Given to me by my last girlfriend
It was hard to speak
With pie in my cheek
Just could not swallow
And my tummy was hollow
Smiling did not help
Made the dog even yelp
Not a pretty ending
That pitiful bending
Into the dog dish it went




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  • longlife
    June 19, 2008

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    LOL this is really cute for a childrens poem! Adorable. First pie last pie,first girlfriend last girlfriend! cute