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Cherry Coke Kisses

Innocent kisses of sweet sixteen
Blushing faces in the school hallway
We went to our classrooms in between
Mostly deaf to what the teachers say

Drive-in movies on warm summer nights
Smooching in the dark with the top down
Cherry coke kisses tasted just right
When cruising the backstreets of town

Big dreams of little homecoming queens 
Are put away with the cap and gown
Opening eyes to what real life means
Discovering the new world we’d found

Memories of a time that were good
When young hearts were filled with song
Though the world was turning as it should
Winds of change always come along

Over and done as we kissed goodbye
All good things must come to an end
We set our hearts free and let them fly
Along with those kisses in the wind














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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Wow, now that takes me way back. Drive in movies, on summer nights, parking along a curve of the river, or the days we would sneak off to some special place just to be with that special one. And, cherry cokes were always the greatest taste too.


  • individuality gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    a good poem, drive in movies, that is something we have never really had here in england. a happy piece here that smiles with love.

  • Judith Chandler
    June 13, 2008

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    A beautiful write, so nostalgic. Such innocence back then. I like the way you bring in the kisses again at the end, as kisses of farewell.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    Thank you for your lovely entry in the contest, it was a joy to read.

    All the best...Sue