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Come To Me My Lover

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"My lordship,

Thou night arrives,
come to me my lover.

I shall seek comfort in your arms.

Many long moons I have waited
to touch thy flesh to mine.

My desires are many,
my knight, my lord!

Let me lie you down,
stroke your wary
body with fine oils."

With oiled hands
I let fingertips glide
over hard muscle little by little,
my eyes never leaving yours.

~~~

"M'lady, forgive me,
but it seems I am lost in your eyes...

Thy hands, soft and warm,
sensations running through out
my body as you touch me.

If I may just get a small kiss,
that would quench at least a small portion
of the fire that builds inside me..."

~~~

"All my kisses are yours for thee taking,
my heart will not rest
till your passion consumes me.

I will lean over thee
to breathe in the breath of
life, taste the sweetness of your lips.

My desires lead with urgency,
to be ravished, taken in midnights paradise.

Your touch I crave,
trembling as fingertips
touchest my soft breast.

Kiss me my beloved deeply,
take possession of what is only yours."

I softly speak these words ...

~~~

Gently caressing your offered breast,
as I kiss you fully on your mouth...

A subtle taste of honey on your lips,
your hair a soft floral scent.

Your body responding to my touch,
we kiss deeper, as I pull you
onto the bed over me and
for an intense moment our eyes are locked,
neither unable to move.

Loosening the rest of your blouse,
removing it to expose you
to my hands, my lips...

Your legs surround around my hips
as you press against me.


I take your breasts,
each receiving full attention
with either my lips or fingertips...

Nipples becoming firm to the touch,
I hear you sigh...

~~~

Sensations never felt before,
I arch my back letting
hardness press between soft thighs.

My need becoming incessant
to have you completely.

The lantern light shimmers over us
as we exchange loves passions.

My hair falls upon your chest teasingly
as you firmly grip it in your hands.
easing you slowly inside, taking my breath...

"I feel your fullness, my lordship."

~~~

Your warm wetness encompasses me
as we gently move in unison.

Soft yet, powerful thrusts, hips burning,
bodies beginning to sweat...

My hands cupping your bosom,
I feel your heart beating faster.

We kiss, breathing is labored,
our sensations becoming one...

Pull you down upon me,
while deeply inside you

I move so that you are below me.

Still connected, I rise up over you,
hair wet from the increasing passion.

Our eyes meet and you see love
mixed with desire
as I whisper...


"I love thee, my beautiful bride."

~~~

Making love has never been so beautiful
I whisper breathlessly...

"I love thee, my beloved husband."



 

 

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  • X ace of spades X
    September 8

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    i liked it. sorry i forgot to comment earlier. i love the font and the archaic tone. i loved the way it was written in two points of views.

  • City Rose
    March 22

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    Geeeeee! Two people wrote this? It's like...wowowow!

    At first, I was thinking, "This is gonna be too long." By the ending, I was like, "That's it? That's all?" Not that you left me hanging, see, but just that I wanted more.

    Well done and congrats on the silver and golds.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 31, 2008
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    I forgot the kudos.

  • Joseph Hollis
    December 31, 2008

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    This poem has been around the block a few times, it seems. A lovely collaboration you have here.The presentation is very large and easy to read. The old fashioned nature of this is quite nice. There's also some modern aspects to this piece as well. Nicely done.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 31, 2008

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    I echoe the sentiments...well done, and a hearty congrats on the well earned Gold


  • Have left the stage gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    There is another composition similar in topic, and therfore bewteen the twe of you, much to be done to separate whose is better. I like the small kiss mentioned, very unauthodox, but yet, it worlks than a tender, subtle or timid kiss. Well done. Sir William.


  • sense surreal gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    a very sensual surrender...it got me totally absorbed

    sorry I am really speechless


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    reading again because this was fun to write with you,
    we had a blast and ummm yea...!
    remember the enjoyment of writing...aw what a concept!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    This is breathtaking and written in such a classy manner. I'm in awe of it's remarkable beauty! Thanks for entering my contest. I’m honored that you would show your work here. Keep up the great writing!


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    Wow this is earth moving, almost like a short play, very articulate, I love language and you used a beautiful array of language here, it dances on my toungue, this is truly a work of art and worthy of great acclaim, thanks so much littlefishone


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 2, 2008

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    Oh this is just so beautiful! I loved reading every last word. Tastfully done!

    This definately is one of the best poems I have read so far, a wonderful collaboration. So very beautiful and romantic indeed.

    Congratulations to you both for writing such a masterpiece

    Take care


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    What an awesome collaboration the two of
    you put together here! This is such a soft
    and beautifully written write with some
    great imagery. Congratulations to you on
    your well deserved gold trophy for this one
    and all the best to you in this contest! I
    hope that you do well with it here! Thanks
    a lot for sharing this one my friends!




    Jeremy0826


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    How beautiful!!

    This is such a romantic and passionate piece!! Well done on this beautiful write, together you have ignited flames in many.



  • CatQueen248
    October 1, 2008

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    Wow, I loved this. You and your wife have done it again. A beautiful masterpiece. So loving and passionate. Definitely worthy of gold.


  • SpyderWebsNSexDreams
    October 1, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    I LOVED THIS!! It is beautifully written! I love how you have two people's view and how you actually used two people to make this poem! I admire the way you made the poem sensual and hot without using harsh language. It got me heated.... I think I need to go find my boyfriend... Anyways GREAT WRITE and I wish you the best of luck, and if it were up to me I would award you gold right now!!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    brillant

    I am blown away, that was very impressive, I love the old English

    Language, very stirring it pierced so many thoughts in my mind

    What a poet! I am blessed to be reading your poems.

    Graciously said,

     

    Rend the Veil

     


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    August 20, 2008
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    adorable.
    Billy's Baby

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautifully penned entry,which I indeed wanted to read over and over, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Sound of Madness
    July 9, 2008

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    This is very beautiful. I've never read anything quite like this before. I enjoyed the old english. Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you much luck.


  • sOuL
    June 29, 2008
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    Very beautiful, sensual and having emotion, i really like your works


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    A wonderful take on an old form. Though you mix new english, with old terms, it still holds an oldworldly feel. Such are the ways of Shakespeare, and Tolkien. A wonderful tale from both sides of one united heart.

    Blessed be,
    Serenity~


  • pickledcass
    June 26, 2008

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    Wow. It's hard to find a poem that TASTEFULLY covers all things bedroom, and you've done it! The shifting perspectives were well done and the old style language was good but not suffocating. A smooth, sweet read.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Beautifully sensual!!!

    So wonderful and romantic in the time setting! Loved the soft touching and tender words shared. The pic is perfect as is the color of the background and font! Just a sweet sensual escape...I will comment on all entries a second time at closing! Thank you both so very much for the wonderful entry!!!

    Blessed Be~
    Love and best of luck!!!
    Sue




  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    June 26, 2008
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    Nice composition. It sounds very chivalrous. Great job.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    oops! i clicked on this without realizing its content matter. not my usual reading but you did an excellent job on this and i wish you well in this contest. thank you for sharing your talent with us here today. viyanna rosemarie

  • hardeepb
    June 26, 2008

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    Linguistic

    This is some of those unique language I've read in a sensual piece and it is structured BEAUTIFULLY. Seems like you thought this one out, through and through. No particularly favourite parts, just an enjoyable read all around! It's not something I'm used to but I feel the tenderness coming off the page; the structure is the best on this. A great write, I'll have to read it again to fully take it in but 7.5/10!

  • twodie4
    June 25, 2008
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    WOW! Passion so well expressed. Beautifully worded breathtaking.
    td4


  • Clinging-to-Life
    June 25, 2008

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    Wow...amazing.. the ending was beautiful it left a lingering desire for passion. I enjoyed how you uesd both the lovers thoughts, and actions. this made it seem more realistic, and the imagery was deliciously tempting. I do admit that I hope my wedding night is even half of what you have expressed. what you explained here I admit, is my ultimate desire.

    You have redefined the word passion.

    Amazing piece

  • AdulteratingDeploy
    June 24, 2008

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    WHHOOOWOOO

    That is intence wow;
    now you know as well as I do.
    That was thunder.
    GOOSSHHHH!
    looveed it.


  • rhondasail
    June 24, 2008

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    My heart is racing...wow...I just hope this wins...all I can say...I bid you adieu, M'Lord and M'Lady...(warm hugs to you both) Peace, rhonda ...I think I need a shower...heehee...

  • midnightblue1272
    June 24, 2008

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    NICE!

    That was beyond romantic; erotic , yet tasteful. This truly will get the romantic urges going. Superb!


  • The Otep
    June 24, 2008

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    That was beautiful!! It flowed amazingly and the story itself was great. Hope that you do well in the cotest, because this one deserves to be recongized!!!


  • onesugar gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Beautiful loving sexy passionate and sensual
    loved the tone, feel, and word usage
    left a beautiful picture in my mind
    this was an absolute pleasure
    Good luck with this a GOLD for sure
    ~sugar~


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    This is beautiful

    You have penned this bery well and with taste its truly a brethtaking read Bravo
    I am out of points to give for the clappies but I say its a three big time


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 23, 2008

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    At first I was a little unsure about the 'thee' and 'thine', feeling that it could have easily become pretentious sounding BUT...

    Not at all... you have described a beauty in 'sharing', in a way which is free of constriction and safely presented within its own true nature. The Medieval language, as now seems to me, serves to point to aspiration and freedom in our love, beyond mere convention. What more fitting for us, than to feel at ease and pleasure in this.

    I like the way you have alternated the stanzas and also given the feeling of exposure to that which in itself retains its quality of intimate privacy, without being corrupted.

    Wonderful sentiments given forth to be shared.

    The best to both of you


    Sol


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Superb

    Ah, a sweet and tender romantic write, with just the right touch of sensuality. For whatever reason this reminds me of one of my all time favorite philosopher/poets, namely: Kahlil Gibran. "The Prophet", is a book I've read at least 20 times over the years and I am fortunate to have 15 volumes of his various writings in my library. Very well written.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    The dance of the eternity through the images of the love you portrayed leading readers into the magic of your heart warming poetry as well..Ah...great work indeed..and yes thank you so much for sharing such a smiling piece..

  • Bob Fox
    June 23, 2008

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    well

    The ending certainly turned this into a beautiful poem. The sensuality throughout captivating. The art of love making worded divinely...


  • vici377
    June 23, 2008

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    wow

    a beautiful wedding night captured..wonderful, blissful passion..a true winner..makes me sigh with thoughts of romance and wonder..makes me feel alive with hope..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Nicely done! Bravo the two of you. Tasteful and sexie! Goodluck in your contest. ~sie


  • echo-ink
    June 23, 2008

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    well, first of all, im a gonna' goes take mes a COLD COLD shower, then im gonna go hide for a

    half an hour. oooo...la...la this was steamin' I almost felt like I was there, EASY LISA, I said almost. wonderful this was very sensual without being raunchy, I love you.....oh....I mean the poem, the poem hehehe good luck in the contest. Great job Tim & Lisa


  • darell
    June 23, 2008

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    Wowser!

    this was an absolute treasure of romantic
    passion and erotic love. you two horny toads
    need to take that shit to the bedroom.lol
    Seriously though it was an exquisite utterance
    of sensual devotion from the lips of lovers
    matched by heaven. Bravo bravo bravo!!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    this was hot! but in a elegant sort of way.
    i loved the old-timey language you chose to use in this (I know it has a name, but it's slipped my mine).

    Fabulous piece and best of luck in the contest


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    Anxiously I await!!!

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