An explosion of the mind
does not, actually,
blow your brains out of your head;
though, like exploding dynamite,
it does cause a lot of noise.
It is to be hoped that later,
when all has quietened down,
remembering the experience
will prevent you from
ever letting it happen again.
A contest entry
- Dynamite by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended June 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting take on the prompt. But it is one that makes you think. Nicely done take on the gien prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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