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sister

I was your sister sitting still,
watching as you opened your present.
I bought you a toy car
you got me a doll.
We played for hours
until we were out.
Daddy tucked us in,
mama sang sweet sweet songs.
You were my friend
in many years past.

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  • Verlecia
    October 14, 2008
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    very loving, something very sharing,


  • jacklyn
    June 20, 2008
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    love you my dear sister


  • queen gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    Sounds like a perfect way to spend your childhood this is very sweet Good job on this poem

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