I was your sister sitting still,
watching as you opened your present.
I bought you a toy car
you got me a doll.
We played for hours
until we were out.
Daddy tucked us in,
mama sang sweet sweet songs.
You were my friend
in many years past.
A contest entry
- in need of ap family by jacklyn.
300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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very loving, something very sharing,


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love you my dear sister


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Sounds like a perfect way to spend your childhood
this is very sweet 
Good job on this poem
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