Love, love, love
it is beautiful but
that is not all that
it happens to be
Love is a splendid
sacred thing and usually
a wonderful feeling which
can be elusive
Love is some times
emotionall murder
as is depression from
the lack of love
Love is love not to
mention unpedictable
and genearlly colorless
most of the time- yes love
is some times murder
Author notes
Mr. Cat, speaking from experience
A contest entry
- Love is.... by Shantalina.
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Comments
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this was interesting.. i love how you picked apart cliches.great work.
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Thanks!
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Love is murder, a cold heartless infection that systematicly searches and destroys the emotional immune system killing, hurting and planting seeds of hope to reinfect over and over, so that no matter how many times you heal, you will always get the disease again... and die one more time painfully in anguish as pieces of you are destroyed before your eyes...
great poem. keep up the good writing
~kar
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Thanks. Maybe some day, we could collaborate a poem.
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