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When The Light Touches Earth





Earth's floor is gently swept
by the oceans minisucle waves
The bringer of life graces us
as her rays touch deep within


They meld together becoming one.





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20-30 words (I dont count them so no cheating.)

Picture prompt - Photobucket

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    Very beautiful and unique take on the prompt.
    I enjoyed this one. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    "they meld together becoming one" I love that line...the is a wonderful poem for the contest...Good Luck