Mercurial emotions find change,
scatter prismatically from moment to day,
revealing and concealing,
yet always enticing to the senses,
she is everything in the world to one
Author notes
pic prompt... 20-30 words
A contest entry
- Delightful Evening Quickie by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended June 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, this is dreamy
I like this, it seems kind of bouncy and happy.
like this girl has found that special someone and it doesn't matter to her what anyone else thinks. They are so in love and he is all that matters.
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OOOh I love the way you ended this.
She is everything to one... Gave it a wistful dreamy effect.
Well done and thank you for entering my contest. 
Delila
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Love the last line! great write...good luck
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