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May lids never close

Missing image
Doe eyes
bounteous ample to conceive
not her world alone,
but my hues well,

picking up pricks
before they touch me,

shoulders forever
my pillows.

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  • Venugopal silver member
    July 15
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    Nice poem sweet sister, I enjoyed its delicasy

  • Venugopal silver member
    June 22
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    Nice poem on mother. I liked it so much.None sacrifices like mother Dear sister
    bhaya


  • AmyPixiDust
    June 13

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    i really love this beautiful picture with a wonderful poem to fit along with it and the yellow background works great with it too, i love the feelings you have put into this wonderful work of art (piece of poetry) i love how you say that "shoulders forever my pillows" wonderful metaphore that could be taken literly also, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy


  • BhajGovindam silver member
    June 13

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    oh! wow.. this is great! nice pic aswell..
    good luck in the contest!


  • poppa silver member
    June 13

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    Beautiful write....where would we be without them aye .....love it


  • catie052 gold member
    June 12

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    oh, your words are so beautiful...Love this Good luck "shoulders forever my pillows" LOVELY

  • penman gold member
    June 12
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    Wonderful

    Oh my this is a great take on the prompt. So very creative. best of luck in the contest.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 12

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    Awe... I love this. Endearing and creative.
    thankyou for this entry in my contest.


    Delila


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 12

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    Such a very endearing piece of comfort and thought! Nicely done indeed! Love the imagery and intricate depth here!!! Best wishes in the contest!

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