Do you think that you are beautiful
When you look in the mirror each night
When you wake up next to the one you love
When you know the chemistry is right
Do you think that you are beautiful
When he tells you that he loves you
When he smiles into your eyes
When he hugs you so perfectly too
Do you think he cares about that inch of fat
You feel around your hips
That scar above your kneecap
That you got when you were six
Do you think if you were that girl right there
That he would love you any less
Its the beauty that's inside you
That calms his every stress
Do you realise that he cares
When you don't think that you look nice
When he's really there beside you
Saying for you he'd pay the greatest price
He tells you that you are gorgeous
And you turn and walk away
Thinking that he is so wrong
You don't believe what he would say
He wants you to know you are beautiful
No matter how you look
No matter what you're thinking
You've got him on a hook
Author notes
Beauty isnt just exterior stuff, and i think that as girls we forget that sometimes. so ive tried to write this from a guy's perspective for some of it.
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very good... i love it... your entry is very impressive



