Molds of human clay,
which walk upon our earth.
With every intensifying step,
drawing deeper from their birth.
Ignorance and hatred,
begin to fill their minds.
Bring them to only,
death stricken finds.
And as they roam so ignorantly,
they seem to forget.
The very soul that brought them here,
and still they live
without regret.
Lord created human beings,
and now without remembrance,
their breath he may seize.
Author notes
if you take it apart, this poem means that god created us and if we continue to destroy all his other creations he will take back the life he gave because we are destroying it
* I kno u asked not for dark writes but I think this is more thought promotoing then dark
A contest entry
- creation by james119.
600 points, ended June 20, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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I agree, this is more thought provoking than dark. It's a sober warning of impending destruction. Much of mankind remorselessly marching toward it's own doom with no thought of the future.
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