he sent a red rose

A red rose
He sent to me
My heart jumped
It pumped so loud
Hello dear

I called him
Your red rose
It touched my heart
Made me feel
Wonderful
As never before
Why so

He enquired
With a big smile
The red rose
depicts love
I thought you proposed me!
Is that so
I knew not
I just liked it
So thought
It might bring
A smile
On your face as well.

A contest entry

A red rose by Angelo di Luce. 480 points, ended June 24, 2008, 16 entries
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abuyi
June 18, 2008

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salaam Aliya.. sweet.. it does bring smile
best wishes for the contest
may your pen be drenched with poetry
- Aliya Abbas
  June 18, 2008
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  w/s
  thanx for the wishes and applause.
Angelo di Luce
June 13, 2008
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Love makes the world go round

Keep smiling

Thank you
- Aliya Abbas
  June 13, 2008
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  thanx for the comment
crimsondew
June 12, 2008

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Salaam....A cute dialogue poem, bringing a smile on the readers..well written...All the best in the contest!
- Aliya Abbas
  June 13, 2008
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  w/s
  thanx a lot dear