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Advances in reason and oblivion.

Strange child,
Do you speak?
Does your woe outweigh your potential?
Strange child,
Speak of the land
the lessons learned by your lovers hand.
The fever of infidelity,
and the decay of the day.
Speak of forever
learn of defeat
Crawl with the curious
Fall with the sleet
"Why must you pursue this path?"
To love the loveless
To rue the day you never did
Strange child,
Built on the face of forever.

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Sorry, as I was writting this I forgot about any of the contest rules

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  • whiterabbit.
    June 24, 2008

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    I like this. It's different from anything I've read in a while. Great write and thanks for entering.


  • WatchingStars
    June 14, 2008
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    wow. this is really deep. love the rhyming scheme. great write and good luck!