My malevolent side hunts
with supertitious ingenuity;
my fate ordained
with blazing belief.
Author notes
13 words -
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 13 Words - [One Day Only] by Desire.
1300 points, ended June 13, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an amazing piece for 13 words. Congrats on the HM
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Determination, effective practice and developed skill weigh the balance of fate toward a hoped for or imagined outcome, but superstitious preparation doesn't hurt! Who knows, but that it allows the mind and muscles to take advantage of their training without the burden of doubt and fear.
Short, but thought-provoking. I actually went on-line to research certain religious and philosophical concepts that occurred to me as I read this!
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WOW!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Fate
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ even with 13Words...after inhaling I kept seeing word: supertitious- and looks like missing a word- s...superstitious (but I knew what You meant)
Now for some reason I was shown the movie: The Seventh Sign and also The Prophecy
it feels connected to the third line each time I read~ I am being shown a man of cloth but wild as it sounds...if You have ever seen 28 Days Later- the man of cloth in the beginning of the movie- he was infected...I am being shown that~ really gruesome and bizarre I'm getting word: Metaphor- as like look deep within the words- for the underlining message~ I'm just passing on what I am seeing~ but the face of this man is unbelievable I want to say like a possession- I'm being shown a mirror but it being punched...Nowwwwwwwwww getting this in connection to be angry~ and reference to word: date
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
my fate ordained
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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