Don't believe everything you hear or see
Research, cotemplate, keep you mind free
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 13 Words - [One Day Only] by Desire.
1300 points, ended June 13, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a good piece, aye, it is all smoke and mirrors at times, people often say i will believe it when i see it, but even that can not be trusted sometimes.
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i enjoyed this
however, some things taste better with a grain of sugar
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Don't
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ even with 13Words...after inhaling I kept seeing word in second line: cotemplate, looks like might be missing an n...contemplate and you....for some reason feels like it might be missing a letter like r...your...
contemplate, keep your mind free.... (I knew what You meant though)
and getting after reading, wanting to say: You are so right~
I use this phrase a lot: take it with a grain of salt...for some things are NOT what they seem
It can appear one way but take on a whole different meaning or context~
for some reason hearing words: car wash- and reference to juicy fruit~
Sometimes I get some really creative images after reading pieces
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...keep you (your) mind free
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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