Unlucky love
unlucky in life
picked Friday the thirteenth...
to take a wife
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Love you Tory
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 13 Words - [One Day Only] by Desire.
1300 points, ended June 13, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XII - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 18, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Unlucky Love
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ even with 13Words...after inhaling I kept seeing words: Brilliant Humor~
and I had to chuckle
Wild as it sounds...I am seeing cracks in pavement as if stepped on a crack...and I'm being shown Fred Astaire dancing in the rain
then an escalator...butttttttttttttttt for some reason...this escalator is going up into the
Heavens~ I'm seeing like shoulders on down-...hearing word: Ancient but seeing like a robe
type garment...and interestingly enough...a hand extended~ phrase I am getting:
Put down Your weapon- and the weapon is not like a gun but seeing word: drugs-
whether substance or alcohol- reference I am hearing it with word: past-
feels like reference to- let it pass~ Images are flashing so fast, trying to decipher
Also hearing: I was there
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...unlucky in life
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Hey! I was born on Friday the 13th! I pretty much have to consider 13 a good number for myself. Cute. Good luck in the contest.
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You know what this in fact happened to me, My ex an i got married Sept 13 1991 on friday...and he was hell ever since.
then got divorced thirteen years later...damn it man lol...
Love you
Tory
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Just shoot him
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s no way...I dont look good in Texas Orange for murderers ...
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Texas is a big state honey, just bury him deep so the Coyotes don't dig him up.
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LOL ~ nice job as always!
GL to you my friend!
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