You signed my soul's
death sentence
soaked in abyss
of darkness,
blindfolding tomorrows
Author notes
picture prompt - B
13 words
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 13 Words - [One Day Only] by Desire.
1300 points, ended June 13, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended June 22, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short but sweet (well not sweet, dark). I think I can relate to the betrayal and utter darkness and wanting to be in isolation to avoid others pain they put on you.
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beautiful.
striking. -
Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Bleeding Scattered Goodbyes
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ even with 13Words...after inhaling I kept seeing word: Profound
for some reason I am being shown word: Novel and like a book being opened- fingers
scanning pages...whether it is a dictionary/thesaurus to look up a definition and alternate
word but being shown a reference type of guide
Something about popcorn~ hearing cheese- and read again- was seeing hands frantically
digging in the soil- searching for something~ remnants of something
Wild as it sounds...I am hearing phrase: You are Pretty~ like in attraction- I am getting
Also nudged to mention: Stand ground-
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...blindfolding tomorrows
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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A darkness peaks from your words but is masked by the beauty of this piece... Well done. Best of luck.
Ken
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Chilling write especially for the prompt use... yet so true... Nice job
GL in the contest ~
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