Why
Is
It
That
Everything
always
Has
To
Be
So
Fucking
Fucked
Up?
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 13 Words - [One Day Only] by Desire.
1300 points, ended June 13, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that is life hon. u know wot they say... there is no gravity... the earth sucks... a great piece,
hugs,
georgie,
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LOL!
Because the good would seem good if the rest wasnt fucked up
Delila
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LOL!
the world started with a 'bang' they say.....
and if it was any other way we still wouldnt be satisfied...
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: W.I.I.T.E.a.H.T.B.S.F.F.U?
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ even with 13Words...after inhaling I kept getting phrase: so true-
as if a reference to murders though~ I was seeing word: murders whether it be in the physical sense of spiritually sense;f but in addition to that senseless tragedies that are like on in a bajillion chances of happening- basically freak accidents
You pose a great question~ and for some reason I kept getting image wise~ like a flash of individuals who contribute to it- instantly serial killers who don't donate Light but exterminate the innocent [take it away] However ~ I'm getting this image of You holding a box- as if there are delights beyond Imagination locked away inside...(Gifts connected to You I am being shown) but the key I am being shown is in the pocket...but not in Yours...I'm being shown like people walking on the street...
and the key is being passed from pocket to pocket
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...Everything always has to be...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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why not? y-knot? happy Friday the 13th, now off with our heads...
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because people like to fuck
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MMmmmmm hmmmm.... I know I do. I admit, this was one of my more deep poems, glad that it caught your attention... if only for a sec.
until release,
grimoire -
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you seemed desperate for an answer, thought i'd help you out there
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Damn that is 13 very poignant words!!!
An intense piece of thought penned here. But what's up with that title? lmao (I noticed first letter of each line, also clever!
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Outstanding! A question for the ages indeed.
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