i tilt my head a little to the left,
ah! there it is,
my dear sweet addiction.
memories begin to unfold,
as i think back to the three,
tormenting and pushing,
yelling and pulling!
oh, how i had enough,
and i could take no more.
i attacked one,
and drank his blood,
the taste of sweet victory,
slightly running down my chin.
and then when the others stupidy ran,
i cut them off.
i had fun with one...
pushed him around a bit,
pulled out his hair,
threw him to the ground.
the other,
i just simply looked into his eyes,
and enjoyed the fear withing them.
i bit into his neck,
his cries of pain the last to be heard of him.
and then i turn to the unconsious one.
he was so handsome,
so dark.
i run my finger across his neck,
and then mark my place,
and slowly i drink from him too.
and all is done.
i wipe my mouth of the mess before me,
and i turn and continue on.
stupid,
silly little boys.
when shall they learn,
never to mess with me?
Author notes
manson... not my best... but whatever. i havent really written a dark poem before. lol
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Comments
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Ooo
I like it. Honestly, I think it was a very great try!
Thanks for the 'Sweet Dream' -
Well,
not the best dark poem but
for your first one hey - it's not that bad.
Then again I'm a hard judge when it comes to dark
you know how good i am at writing
dark poems. dark erotic poems.
cha.
[says the girl who has written nonstop love poems all week]
*cough cough*
It's good!
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