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Judgement Day

Living life expecting a free ride
Cater to you no matter what you do
This is the way you expect to be treated
Being self-righteous,arrogant,& conceited
your a cold heart without compassion
You take no responsibility for your actions

The honest & the true are so naive of you
But of course! You know this
Those are the people you'd rather get
Your after what you can gain no matter the pain

But a time will come and you'll meet your dead end
Look back then, and see where you have been
When theres nothing to claim
Look to yourself for the blame
Taking from others and playing people for a fool
Will surely back fire on you
And soon it will come, by your way

IT"S WHAT WE CALL JUDGEMENT DAY!

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  • completely mad
    June 15, 2008
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    ewww judgment day...muahahaha this is creepy...great poem...thanks for entering

    • carmen3
      December 5, 2008
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      on judgement day

      Hi completely Mad, Believe it or not I just read your comment , I did'nt stick around I guess in june and today got an e-mailing inviting me to come back. I plan to enter a contest or two now that I'm here again . I really liked how you came across on your comment too ! Thankx, Carmen3

    • carmen3
      December 5, 2008
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      This is the 1st I read on my poem ,I just got back to allpoerty since last june . thankx for your input sorry it's taken so long to get back to you.

  • Warrior7
    June 14, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi carmen3

    Great poem this is what i call when karma comes around and it sure does to those who think it's ok to hurt other people. Great work. Keep up the writing

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