He loves me so,
He loves me not,
I let reality go
And toss another bean into the pot.
Could he love me?
This foolish little thing,
Oh how I wish it could be…
Another bean into the pot I fling.
The sun and my hopes shine high
Can you see me heart?
I will it to you with every sigh
Even though we are so far apart.
When I sing, my voice rings for you
Oh I wish to kiss you
I cannot wait until the day we do,
No matter what I have to go through.
Take me and we will soar!
Higher and higher, your last wish to you I’ll give
Of you I shall never ask more,
Just let me love you for the rest of every moment that you live.
Oh you know you are in love
Don’t deny where fate has brought us
Never curse the heavens above,
Even though I know at times I’ll fuss.
My perfect heart, my love, my sweet dear
Do you know how much I love you?
I love you more just because you aren’t here,
It means my love for your heart will grow stronger too.
So embrace it! And love it!
I’m here to stay; I refuse to not have you as my own
My heart’s a puzzle piece, and to you it’s fit
Please, for the rest of ever, let me return the love you’ve shown.
And I will
With
That single
Kiss
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Seeing as how Keith inspired this write I'm going to go ahead and dedicate this piece to him.
Surely not my best but I think it's pretty good and well, hey he's a pretty cool cat and I love him to death. =]
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you have brought out the most critical confusion a girl goes thru in her life time at least once.Besotted,fixated and madly in love are some of the words that are used in this state of mind.I think you should visit some of my poetrya s well. It is bound to inspire you even out of this confusion. -
A Lot of people ask thmeselves this any time they fall in love with someone. As William Penn said. Our greatest fear is to lose what we love the most. And unrequitted love feels almost the same as lost love. You really covered that well in your poem.
Also I really liked the rhyme and the only thing in the poem I noticed was in line to. I'm not sure if you meant to put my in there or if putting me was an intentional thing. Whichever it is its not a bad thing and doesnt really mess with the flow of the poem. It just caught my attention. You did a great job with this one Brittany.
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very good. guys are stupid... dont waste your time on them... lol jk, you and i know full well that i say that, but i do just that. but all girls go through that, he loves me, he loves me not stuff... its a part of life. and we want them, and need them, but will it ever happen? we can only hope so... guys are stupid. wanna become a nun with me??
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God no,
I am one hell of a hot mynx
and I do love a god sexxorz
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this is such a wonderful write. i think ever girl asks that question once in their life. maybe not all, but most
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Thank you =]
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