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The bears were out for the last week before "cave time".... lol
This is a photo of one of the cubs. Mammoth, California, 2003
Written December 30th, 2003
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Great!
OMG A photoku! My Favorite!
I love it, as always, & that cub is so cute
Wow, you are so brave, i have no doubt that uknow what ur doing & I have no doubt that you keep a safe distance!! But be careful when your around bears & such like that, i worry bout my Cyber Dad
Much Love!!!
---Sara
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Terrific photo and Tanka.But I wonder are you in any danger when you take these photographs.Where was mama bear.Your Photoku's are always a joy.Bill
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awww this is really cute! hes a pretty cub. Nice picture. And great Haiku/Tanka!
-Angel
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i have so much respect for people who can write haiku (probably anyone who isn't me!!) and this tanka is so successful... helped of course by the cutie picture - ah.
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you have a great perspective on things that most take for granted. its refreshing to visit your poetry.
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Oh love this picture and your memories and reflections of them......Excellent piece enjoyed muchly...
Your photoku always my favorites
Hugs,Sherry
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Back again to photoku man
your writes always make me believe that sometimes word can have so many meanings for so many feelings, I can see that in this great piece.
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what a cute pic and great write
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This invokes a greater thought which a traditional haiku could not. The real purpose of Tanka as I understand it. I love this; its simplicity and hidden contemplation definitely appeals to me! Playful yet powerful image.
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Good piece, can't help but wonder. After the bear cub enters its cave, will it still be the same playful cub that emerges, or an old wiser bear?
Very enjoyable pic and words.
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warming to the heart
Great Job in my opinion ~ Don ..Just before the long winters nap ..The photo is great but the words flow into my eyes like a mystical trance..I agree with Tormented soul ~ STUNNING !! -
Awww... thats the cutest thing ever...
Thats an amazing pic... did I tell u I think its the cutest thing ever? Awwwwwww...
LOL! Great Tanka (whatever its called) I don't know what it is but I'll look it up ~smiles~
Keep it up.
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I just love the Tanka and the photo is very nice!
Muse
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One word... STUNNING!
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Ahh
Sweet pic but I bet if he got mad
Owheeeee would hate to be in front of his path
Another good one hun
Love
Yer pal
Susan~~~~~




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Hey, I just realized something. I was joking around about calling you Grizzly Adams from now on but if I called you Grizzly Baird, that would be darn close to "Grizzly Bear." Coincidence?? haha (Insert Twilight Zone music here.)
Mark
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Ahhh, another mini-vacation. Thanks!
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I guess the cub will wake up no longer a cub....
Great shot, amazing that you could get it. This is a sweet poem; I like how the line "pleasure in the setting sun" could refer to the bear's pleasure or yours. And the best part: the title! -
YAY more photoku ..tankas ..
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This was very cute and the picture is gorgeous.
~Amanda~










