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Pretty Girl

Pretty girl
Is all alone
In this world

Pretty girl
Can’t find a place
To call home

Pretty girl
Jumps around
From men to men

Pretty girl
Just wants to feel
Anything at all

Pretty girl
Is worn
And abused

Pretty girl
Really doesn’t feel
Pretty at all

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  • turpentine
    February 15
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    Really good!


  • sewasham gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Nice write. Short but powerful lines that express alot of emotion. Good job on this. Take care and Have fun. Steve


  • The-Choke
    June 15, 2008

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    I like this poem a lot. The lines are short and sweet, and the message comes across so clear at the end. I think everyone feels that way at one point or another, and you describe it in a way that makes me to empathize for the pretty girl more and more with every line.


  • DeSiBoO14
    June 14, 2008

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    aW!!...dIS iS a rEaLy GuD pOeM!!
    "Pretty girl
    Really doesn’t feel
    Pretty at all"
    wOw!!I lUvD dAt PaRt!!ItS sOo tRu!!eVeRy1 MaY tHiNk Ur SoO PrEttY bUt DaT dOeSnT mEaN u FeEl DaT pReTTY!!...gReAt JoB!!..cHeCk OuT mY pOeMs 2!!


    • loving.a.soldier
      June 28, 2008
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      Hey! thanks for the comment! I will definitely have to check out your poems sometime!

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