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Love and Lust

Love
Is to touch someone and
Make their world spin
It’s to look at someone and
Make the butterflies go crazy
It’s to kiss someone and
Make them go weak in the knees

Lust
Is to touch someone and
Make them hot with desire
It’s to look at someone and
Make their insides tingle
It’s to kiss someone and
Leave them wanting more

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  • tears.of.silence
    April 8

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    Very well done. Excellent description of love. I like the way you wrote this. I think it could be extended out some more to show more of the emotion. Great work. This poem receives a 12. You've got a total of 27. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy


  • jazzcat gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    Interesting look at these subjects. So often we all confuse one for the other. You can love someone and still lust for them, but if you just lust for someone, it doesn't necessarily mean you love them. Nice job.

  • Improv Machinery
    June 25, 2008

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    what dictionary did you steal this from lol. great description. it reminds me of my first girlfriend. the images are very vivid as well. you did a great job with this write.


  • The-Choke
    June 15, 2008

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    You really sum it all up right there. I love how you describe these two feelings and I can't think of a better way to do it. I feel like you could possibly expand on this idea and make both of these more developed and into their own poems, which I think would work really well if you did try that.