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Hope in the Night

Seated by an arching window,
let us read by candlelight and cobweb...

Let us wander where soft light
trims the outlines –
turning trees to shadows, shades fantastic,
full of lonely heroines
and knights enshrined in legends,
moved by moonbeams
beating where their hearts would be
if life were not a palace
fit for faerie queens
dancing to the claps of thunder,
banging cloud on cloud
like heaven’s tambourines


Dusting age off yellowed pages,
let us learn of long forgotten tales
and smile for all the vibrant lives,
anonymous in history;
for all the songs not sung;
for all the stories never to be told
by those who dreamed or
lived their constant nightmares;
for those who loved until, by death,
were cruelly interrupted –
and with this soft remembering
find some fragile hope
for when our own night comes

Let us not speak ill of poets,
let us know them all as friends –
as scribes engaged in understanding,
guiding magic from the angles,
holding life’s full beauty up:
a mirror to the readers’ eyes
in hope they might do more than look,
in hope that they might see

So, when a single quill is held
while eyes pose questions to a rose
about its secret meeting with the dew,
one so scarlet, one dressed so...
diaphanous...
let us raise a goblet by the river
and, with a hint of curtsey, a nod
or inclination of the knee,
let us toast the spread of wings, so white,
that make the Swan so rare
and therefore special





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With thanks to Night Hope, for her valued friendship and never-ending support.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    July 18, 2008
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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Such passions. You do the lady proud with your words, and she must surely think nothing but the best of them.


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 14, 2008
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  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    "and with this soft remembering
    find some fragile hope
    for when our own night comes"

    ~ * ~

    "So, when a single quill is held
    while eyes pose questions to a rose
    about its secret meeting with the dew,
    one so scarlet, one dressed so...
    diaphanous...
    let us raise a goblet by the river"

    ~ * ~ * ~

    Memories slow the hovering hand
    that holds the pen

    gracefully tendered,
    gratefully sworn,

    although slightly strengthened
    & torn by storms
    surreptitiously sanctified
    within gentled moments,

    a compelling echo
    one cannot endure

    without parchment
    & moonlight.


    What a kind, beautiful, generous thing for you to do, dear Scribe. What a sweetly sentimental & deeply understanding piece this is, Peter. I had to at least try to respond poetically. Thank you so much, my Friend. Good luck in Nicky's contest, Sweetie. Wanda


  • PageTurner
    June 12, 2008

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    Swanee will love your chivalry and days of olde take, as I do. She always had a soft-spot for knights in armor and gallantry. I myself am sorta her Don Quixote, she of course, my Dulcinea Anyways, your remarkable rendering attending to Wanda's enormous heart, compassion, and Poetic proficiency was displayed on a canvas brushed with loving care and deep feelings, I love how you ended it...

    "let us toast the spread of wings, so white,
    that make the Swan so rare
    and therefore special"


    Yes, Let Us!'clink'
    A Treasured Tribute, Scribe.

    ~ Nicky♥

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