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Going Home

By Montie and Tyler Barbour

Are the streets there paved with gold?
glistened rays to pave your way?
Is it never hot or cold?
as a perfect autumn day?

Have you seen the Son of Sons?
and your thirst for knowledge fed?
Have you looked upon His throne?
Have you heard the words He said?

Did they meet you at the gate?
loved ones gone some time before.
Do they know how much you’re loved?
and remembered evermore.

Will you be our angel guide
when our paths again have crossed
Will you feel the love we share
as we mourn the time we lost.

Author notes

This was written by my 9yo and I following the passing of his beloved Grandmother. We love you Mom!

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  • Deep and Emotional

    This is really very beautiful. A deep and powerful piece from the heart. Out of the mouths of babes and sucklings speak the truth. Well done for this.

    Wayne Leon