From the most quaint quark and faintest echo,
resonates an infinite and eternal bond from beyond the surface.
In essence, an undefinable
and indefinite word
unspeakable and unheard.
A rare blessing:
to simultaneously exist and observe.
One syncopated oscillation between
both sides of the looking glass.
Impossible-
for a simean fist to grip the vastness of.
Above, below, left, right, within, without.
An undeniable might........
which travels at incomprehensible speeds
that exceed and inhabit light.
The inevitable rhyme that can be neither outrun or outsmarted.
No true chaos discovered
regardless of how frequently analyzed.
Nothing =
concrete, a most tangible substance.
Speculation fills the void,
as energy clusters increase in frequency.
Bravely venture into
the increasingly neverending possibilities.
A contest entry
- Loose yourself into Largeness by Thoughts-of-Soloman.
1750 points, ended July 11, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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In Visible Symmetry
The unseen world behind the visible one.
Indefinable mystery.
The miracle of dimensions.
Grandeur of 'Energy' prior to the tangible results.
Universal law beyond labelled definitions.
Wonderful last stanza. I read:
Matter doesn't exist in the way most commonly thought of,
even scientifically, apparently the parts of an atom have the equivalent relative distances between them as can be likened to the distances between stars.
Energy transforming constantly into the revelation of changing forms, unique in each instant. I think it great that you have approached this subject of basic 'matter'. The word 'Bravely' I'm not so sure about, as this would imply choice and in this instance I think 'commanded' would be more appropriate... unless of course I am wrong and you have yourself adopted the being of this phenomena and it refers to your own bravery.
Your write points to the spiritual without stating or labelling it as such and again this is great.
I still feel that you have used your existing knowledge and considerations to put this together more so than actually exploring into its being with your own and which I still maintain is possible. I mean that I hear a voice speaking from here, rather than one from a newness of first time meeting by venturing into 'newness' of relation with the subject.
Still a great write and yes, the last stanza sounds like it's about to explode but before it does it knocks hard right on the door of the mystery of 'tangible matter' very admirably.
Thank you so much for this entry.
Sol
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Thank you for a wonderful entry into the contest.
All the best to you
Sol -
that was wild Everse!
In Visible Symmetry, very cleverly done, I had to go
and google it to remind myself what it was!
(lol)
sorry i'm a little rusty on my symmetry!
You really put a lot of thought and chose every word
cleverly! way to write our New Science Guy of Gluttons
for Punishment.!
Hooray!
ears/Seattle we'll have to the MadScientist of Glutton.
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