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The Beasts

The words cut into me like a dull knife tearing at my heart
i tried to stay strong and hold back my fear
but the tears pushed out so fast, i couldn't control
the burning pain building inside me like fire to gas
my mind felt numb i couldn't move i sat there trembling
they tore into my heart and beat it to the ground
they didn't care, my pain gave them nothing but pleasure
how could i be so feeble, how did i think it would be okay
now he's not here with us any more, gone for what seems and eternity
and they smile upon this torture they are selfish beasts
their lies bore them happiness, they had everyone fooled
how did people with such hate come to this Earth
they deserve nothing but to rot in the bottomless pit of Hell
and now i stand there holding on for dear life
while they rip you out of my arms and make you leave
Oh  how i cry you are here again to fill his empty space
you must be so lonely sitting there with no one for comfort
My heart will continue to ache for you until you are back
this evil brought upon us today won't get us down
we won't make them happy they can suffer just as we did
i will miss you until you are back with us. until then




Author notes

These people are horrible.. i hope non of you run into to such sick creatures like these.. if you have..i pity you

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  • Antebellum
    March 26
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    the meaning is sad, but the writing is great.


  • offlimits
    August 10, 2008

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    this is so good i liked it and it sad to know that people loose ones they really care about and love


  • newnoakua
    August 10, 2008

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    Wow, just... well wow. It's good, and it's sad to know so many people run into beasts like this. This is a really good poem, kinda run together, but still really good!


  • Below-Zero
    July 13, 2008

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    this poem was good but it could have been made great if you didnt run everything together in a confusing structure but i understand your hatred of these types of people but then again i can understand alot of evil in the world


  • PrincessOfDecent
    June 19, 2008

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    Yes I know exactly what you mean. This happen to me not to long ago. Just last year. For four years I dealt with the pain. Even though the creature left. I still feel the pain that was dugged in to me.


  • alwaysapartofme
    June 12, 2008

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    Sis this is so the truth! I know these creatures are pure evil and they ripped him out of our arms but they will get theirs! It is a truly saddd and point proving poem!

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