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Revenge for The Dead

Crushed beneath the tires-
I lost him to the tar.
Seeking vengeance has driven me
into a black despair.
He never fell for things
his heart belonged to the wind.
He lived in a material world
where his kind could never win.
Then the world he balanced
fell like china to the ground
All he could take was the bottle-
among drugs he was continuously found.
As if the world couldn't be any harder
upon his imprisoned soul,
he was hit by a drunk driver
and driven to the tar.
Now I seek revenge
upon the man who killed him
and upon the world that willed him
to be driven to the tar.




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  • HaleyMary
    June 13, 2008

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    This seemed very dark. It made me think of death and loss and of the unfortunate things that happen in life that causes people to lose their loved ones. A classmate of mine from high school passed on about a month ago from a car accident. I don't know if it was drunk driving related on the part of a driver in another car or not. But, it's always sad when other's lives are cut short.
    Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.