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Slightly Twisted

Revelling in the mindless madness
That hovers on the edge of non-reality
I'm forgetting about the sadness
And embracing this twisted brutality.

A shadow of hesitation
Crushed swiftly by beggars and theives
Followed closely by determination
A distorted world my mind weaves.

My father's spinning in his grave
And my mother's cursing my existance
But I'm finally, no longer a slave
I'm joining Hell's resistance.

Cry chaos, my soul is free
Scream panic for all the tears
For so long I couldn't be
Held fast by pathetic fears.

And the skulls dance merry in the air
That feeds my decaying, decadent style
So come on in, if you care
And feel free to stay a while.

There's no price you need to pay
Well, nothing you can't afford
A portion of your soul, per day
Gets you pleasure, pain, food and board.


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Picture Prompt: picture -- Moerser Girl with zombies by MAROK ART

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. I loved the darkness. I am sure it fit the picture. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 14, 2008

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    oh i like the almost humours tone to this..but great work on the darkness...and the flow this just read through so smoothly

    Thank you so much for this , good luck

    Cindy