We stand there, my hands in his
Our eyes completely lost in the other's
Words perch on the tip of my tounge
Yet I don't know what to say
I tell him there are no words to
Describe how I feel and he smiles
Cups my chin with his hand
Brings my face towards his
Our lips meet...and in that instant
I feel a bliss like I have never known
Could I be in Heaven?
All we wanted to say is said
All our feelings are made known
It's like lightning struck
Electricity pulses through my body
My knees go weak
I lose my breath
He releases me and smiles
When there are no words...a kiss says it all
Author notes
Gah the ending is weak...hopefully I can get on and tweak it some more before the contest is judged
And I didnt read the rules
my favorite color is blue
and words I like are shiny captivating electric...yeah lol
A contest entry
- A Moment in Forever by Nephlim.
600 points, ended June 16, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thanks for following most of the rules :P
One of the rules lied to you, and you shouldn't tell the judge you didn't read their rules. How ruuuude
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Onto commenting! I loved how you took the contest and made it how it's supposed to be, the description of hesitation and movement as clear as the feelings! Good luck
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