red roses
twenty or so
just laying there upon her pillow
she picks them up
and sniffs them lightly
then falls
a card
written for secret
she reads
her hear melts
as to hear
"your mine body and soul
never shall i give up
on this love of infinity"
then footsteps
she turns
and runs
into the arms
of her infinite
love.
A contest entry
- A red rose by Angelo di Luce.
480 points, ended June 24, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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the line her hear melts is suppose to be her heart melts the t just didnt get in sorry
corie -
Did you mean[ her heart melts ]
Please correct.
Thank you. -
A good piece!!!!!!!!!! I got a little confused at this point:
"her hear melts
as to hear"
Was that suppose to be "her hair melts" Best of wishes in the contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
I think there are some spelling mistakes
[ her hear melts ]
Please correct
Thank you
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