Seeking the sorrow of my heart,
petals led me through my torment,
stained red because of my tears
of passion and desire.
Seeking the song of my mornings
so I can dedicate it to your lips,
singing near them, feeling
their nervous breath.
My tears of joy hide timidly
from your presence, I don't want you
to know yet about my beautiful
anguish of simplistic affection.
My attachment to your voice,
keeps me going forward looking
and wishing to one day have a
tomorrow at your side.
And with these words and a red rose,
I symbolize my inspiration, a lovers ambition
to one day drink the essence of eternity,
the key of a forever love.
A contest entry
- A red rose by Angelo di Luce.
480 points, ended June 24, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What comes to your mind when you read this?
Comments
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Congrats
Well done, thank you for entering my contest
Very moving write
Nick
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lovely indeed
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Very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading this very much!!!! Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!!!!!
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Touching, heart felt
Thank you.
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