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The darkness of her eyes

the darkness of her eyes
surpasses so much more
than the pale brown
of their color
and I stare into
their shadowy depths
half expecting
half hoping
for them to draw me inside her
where she has so long
been hiding

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  • Midnite-Rae
    February 23

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    This is so sad. But I can relate to this at times. You did a wonderful job. Keep up the amazing work Lyn.