She tore down my web, that wretched deb
for a place to eat her whey
I confronted the girl but in a whirl
Miss Muffet ran away.
Now I was kind, but never mind
I must have scared the miss
So here's the scoop, my house did droop
my life had gone amiss.
My dinner was lost, the final frost
construction is underway
I need a home in which to roam
to spend my nights and days.
A contest entry
- Strange Fairy Tale Heroes and Villains by Melodies.
650 points, ended June 17, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think.
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Hi Carolyn !!
A delightful poem you have crafted here .
Brought a smile to my day thank you !!
A pleasure to read - indeed ...
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Exceellent rhyming and a delightful poem that was a pleasure to read.
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Awww... poor 'lil spider creature thingy.
Well, maybe the spider becomes Charlotte and hangs out with Wilbur in the next tale. 
A darling poem that makes me smile >>>
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Oh this is excellent!!! I've never in my life felt sorry for a spider... but I do now!
laurie
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Very clever.
This is very clever and I think that you did do a nice piece here. I liked the Spider Man comics and the movie. This was creative and clever.
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