There's only so much I can take from people
Only so much whining and bitching, only so much being pushed aside
Pushing towards that invisible line
Cross it and I'm not the same, you see the darkest side of me
So stop dragging me into your problems, chances are I can't deal with them
Stop expecting me to work miracles for you. I can't.
Stop expecting me to drop everything and run to help you. I won't
I am dealing with my own problems first
You see...
You're inconsequential, you don't matter to me.
I don't sleep at night if you're unhappy
In fact I like it, I like hurting people who hurt me
I get a kick out of it.
So...
Don't expect me to come running when you call at 2am
Or...when you wake me up by text, don't expect me to be in a good mood
In fact, don't bother getting hold of me if I'm not happy with you.
Because...
I'll be a bitch to you.
No point pleading with me, No point trying to fight your corner. I won't listen.
Not
At
All
Unless you're one of the four, My girl, My guardian, My girl's best friend or my chipmunk.
Author notes
Just about how I feel.
There's FOUR people I don't mind whining to me. Two of them are on my author page. The other two aren't on the site
What do you think?
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great poem. loved the way you spaced it in the last stanza with the
"Not
At
All"
really emphasized your point
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Wow...
I hope I don't piss you off... And I'm sorry if I hurted you!! Your like a REAL brother I never had 
So... Yea loves you like forever!
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wow, I really liked this...so when you hurt me it really didn't matter to you.
I don't like it but I totally respect it, if I piss a bitch off and make the bitch cry then fuck I don't feel a thing! never knew this side of you 
and your new gf is very pretty! I know in my pic I don't look anything pretty I wanted to show boob but not too much...anyway, love the poem
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an honest , right to the point write, not sure exactly what to say about this one as i care about most people unless they hurt me or mine, but thank you for sharing and for not being afraid to speak your mind
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Koby! I really like this, it shows exactly how you feel so much emotion was put into it. Maybe people will get the point and stop whining to you, I know how annoying it can get over a period of time.
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i love this! it shows so much emotion and anger and just like everything, its weird how much i can relate to every word you said, well great job!
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Good work here Scott! The anger shows and I can feel it as I read it . Thanks for all your poetry!
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wow that was really good. i luved it
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i like it... and i will try not to piss you off... i will try my darndest heh
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wow
this is most writen that i have ever read and it was great -
i love this
I love this poem. i feel the same way some times. especially when people call me in the middle of the night.
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This is probably my favorite part, "'ll be a bitch to you.
No point pleading with me, No point trying to fight your corner. I won't listen." I really like the emotion.
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So Honnest
I like this you are keeping it real. Being dumped on does suck, some people are emotional vampires who will drain you till nothing is left letting you heal they come back for seconds, and some come back for more after that, it is up to us to drive a stake through their heart before they use us up completely and we turn to ashes that blow on the wind. Great Write
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lol... I think the poem is very universal because we all feel "dumped on" from time to time. You just feel like screamin' at 'em and putting up an "out of patience" sign. I know. I teach high school Grins.
Write on, poet.
Don't let the bums ruin your day.
Blessings,
Myth
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Wow i love the anger u show in this poem man, it jus smacks u in the face i can see where ur coming from, Great Write, keep up the good work.
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HEY
look what you should do when people are bitching and wanting to argue with you is inorge them because they are so not worth it k
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oh and SPAM!@
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really good
very true
I know the feeling, rgreat emotion lol thats right let it out great job.
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really good
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wow...i think we all feel that way at one point or another! all in all loved the poem=]
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Chipmunk?lol...Well I loved this freaking poem!You are so good at expressing the hate and pain and frustration I've felt because of people that expected me to save them!I agree with you...we need to save ourselves or just die like we're supposed to!You rock and I when I put my poem on here called Breaking Point I'd like you to read it and tell me if you think it's anywhere near as good as yours!I don't but I'd like to here what you think!
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You've inspired me to write something now.
Thanks & kick-ass work.
--Aden
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Well written, I can only semi relate, cause no one bitches to me but only because no was talks to me.lol. Hard to bitch without talking.lol.
The comments say it sounds harsh, but for some reason it doesn't sound harsh to me, not as harsh as I've heard anyhow.
Shawn -
harsh
it's well written but now im scared on where i stand
it's got alot of tone to it and the mood is well you can feel it thru the screen
nice job
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wow i like it but it sounded really harsh to me
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awww, this is very emotional, and no you shouldnt have to deal with people, especially not that early.lol
*hugs*
keep writting and take care
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mmmmmokay but hope you don't mind me smile with the sarcasm, angst and the humor...it gives you that kind of impact which I wish I could...
this is the kind of "what you see is what you get" and I don't give a damn.
Sometimes politeness is synonymous to hypocrisy
Thank you for the read.
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I guess that means I can whine and bitch at you anymore, not being one of the special four lol. Nice to know you are able to vent of you might explode
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WOW!
this is amazing!! ive missed your writing!
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lol loved it, i guess you where letting off some steam when you wrote this, because thats haw i feel when people drag on and on and on, oy and you best make that 5 people hun, what about little old me lol
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Can relate
You vent a lot of anger in this poem, yeah way to go, I see a bit of me in there somewhere, Like you feel like saying, "Go get a life"...leave me alone! This is a well penned piece and loved reading it.
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lmao... i love this one... reminds me so much of me... seem to be everyones sounding board. sometimes you just gotta get tough n say... look i got my own fucking problems an they are a fuck sight worse than yours... deal with it. of course if someone tis in genuine need im always right there... but if someone constantly whines or screws me over i can also be the bitch from hell. well penned,
hugs,
georgie,
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Cool
I like it!
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wow! theres alot of emotion! i love it! its good to let out all ur emotion no matter the way u feel! its alowasy good to get it out
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true i like your pome man
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LOL i love this poem i only help certain eople and thats ONLY my friends and i loved the ending it tottally made me laugh
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this poem is great. i think that poeple can relate to it. because there is so much that people can take until they finally break.
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LOL i like your honesty. It must have felt great to get this out. I hate it when people wake me up in the middle of the night or very early in the morning for BS reasons too. For rude!
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thats really good..
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wow
i i feilt like that too. nice to know that someone eles goes through that too. hang in their
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Wow I feel the exact same way!
All my life I've been really generous: Building back friendships, giving hugs, comforting when sad. but now I have so many problems going on that I don't have time for fixing other people's problems, I have to fix my own first, and they still can't see that I can't be so generous at the moment.
Totally relatable. Nice job, this was awesome, probably my favorite out of all your writes.
~Pandy
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Very nicely written. Beleive me when I say this... I feel the same, the only person I didn't really know whom spilled his wee heart out to me, had been keeping it in for all his life, so made an exception there.
Great write, keep up the amazing work!
Freedoms
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Oh man loved this poem, it is such a playful take on revenge, and the end line was brilliant. One of the best!!! thanks for giving me the priviledge.
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Good
Mate i though it was a really good poem .. you rock at a poet .. You should enter a competition
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