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Little Bubble Bath

When I step in my tub
it's rubba dub dub.
In my own little world
I can imagine anything.

I'm in a sea of foam
and I can still touch the bottom.
I've landed in big pile of snow,
now I can make snow angels.

My bubbles are my escape
from all my bumps and bruises.
My bubbles are my land of fantasy.
Rubba dub dub.

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  • longlife
    June 15, 2008
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    CUTE!!! I like this. Good job thanks 4 the entry.


  • foreverair
    June 12, 2008
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    oh, this is soooo cute! wonderfully awesome, i love it!