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Goodbyes

I am
Tortured by my pain
You never
Once used your brain
You just
Simply turned a blind eye
Don't even
Start to say goodbye
For I
Will be all alone
With this
Chaos and pain I've known
Well I
Just want you to stay
And take
This anguish away
I want
You to hold me
But now
You turn and flee
Don't dare
Even start to think
It's me
I'm on the brink
Move back
I need to breathe
You just
Leave me to seethe
I can't
Do this another day
We're just
Slowly slipping away
I want
You always in my life
But you
Left me holding my knife
To my
Soft penetrable veins
Damned to
An eternity of fire and chains
And now
I leave with out my ally
I warned
Not to say goodbye

Author notes

i miss my ex more than anything, and this is one of so many poems i have wrote about him

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  • bloodpoetry
    June 12, 2008
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    Heart felt !!!


  • ErisLeFae
    June 12, 2008

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    I empathize. it feels like all went well until u used "the L-word" then pooff! he's gone. that's why i'm afraid to use it with this guy i'm now seeing.

  • maggy1126
    June 12, 2008

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    aww.. thats so sad... girl been there too... you can feel the pain thru your poem very vividly.. good write..

  • Sun-shiney
    June 12, 2008

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    me like. thanks for entering. * tears* i don't want my love to leave me. he said he will be back i 7 to 11 years to marry me. and be with me its so hard and yes i to have picked up that same knife manny times. just thinking of him getting lost


    • Boxingboy
      June 12, 2008
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      hey no knives

      no no no no no no no never leave you for anyone else nononononononononnonononononononnnonononononononever no no no no no no no no nno no no no no no nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo never never never never never never i will neve leave you for abyone else



      heck i'd be missing out on being with you no no no i will not ever leave you for anyone else AND I MEAN IT please i mean itand i will come back yes yes yes yes yes yes i wil

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