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[ I told you that I always keep a promise. ]

I told you that I always keep a promise.
That I will never break one.
You got to understand I'm not like everyone else.
What I say will always be true.
I do love you.
You may say that I don't but in my heart I know I do.
I never felt this much love before until I meet you.
I never thought we would be here.
Talking about marriage, children, and a house.
I get butterflies whenever we kiss.
But when you say we need to talk.
My heart feels like it could break.
Whenever someone says that it's never good.
I told you that but you still say it.
Waiting until we have to talk when we are alone.
I don't know how much more I can't take.
I love you so.
I won't ever hurt you that is not the way that I am.
I cherish each moment I spend with you.
If I could give you my heart to let you know that I won't leave.
Would you take it from me?
I wish I could to prove to you that what I am saying is true.
A token of my love is what I want to give.
But I can't not the way I want to.
I hope that you can see pass some of the bad to the good.
I have my days, don't we all.
Baby you got to understand when I say I promise I mean it.
Ain't nothing going to break it.

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    December 26, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwww this is awsum who did u write it bout?

  • OurxBeginning
    June 23, 2008

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    A very strong piece. I hope that they see that you do love them and that you'll never break their heart. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • inhisimage
    June 13, 2008

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    This poem is so adorable. The emotions portrayed are so strong. You can tell how strong your feelings are in this poem


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 12, 2008

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    this is really well written,
    i love this poem so so much,
    its got so much emotion and depth,
    all my love, keep penning,
    love kitty xx