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Nature's Embrace

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The sun setting on the horizon line,
As damask streaks appear in the dusk sky.
White crested the waves fall softly in line
To the shore where the noisy seagulls fly.

Between the day’s end and the darkest night,
Where the Sun King kisses his lady Moon.
They dance to bring a summer’s warming light
Stirring the deep rhythm of nature’s tune.

Pagan dancers join with the Solstice beat,
The world’s music flows on the breeze yonder,
Reaching the native warrior’s bare feet
Leaving all with a mystical wonder.

Nature’s embrace is a gift of free love
Softly her kisses on the wind  travel,
Turn the circle on from the skies above
To the pulsing of the Sun King’s gavel.

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Well done Jems, this really is a joy to read and I know the Solstice will be with us soon...enjoy.

    Love and hugs
    Sue


    • Ceridwens Soul silver member
      June 18, 2008
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      All too soon its Midsummer, seems such a short time since Yule. If Andy if is well enough I'm hoping to meet the dawn rise on Friday at Avebury ... we will see.

      Litha blessings to you and yours my friend.

      Jem xxxx


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 12, 2008

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    Oh Jems this is so butiful

    Between the day’s end and the darkest night,
    Where the Sun King kisses his lady Moon.
    They dance to bring a summer’s warming light
    Stirring the deep rhythm of nature’s tune.

    that stanza is awsome

    xxx Your angel xxx



    • Ceridwens Soul silver member
      June 13, 2008
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      Its kinda nice writing away from the human relationship though I am still people watching when I get chance.

      Thanks for the comment

      YLD

      Jem


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    What a beautiful poem about Nature and the Summer Solstice. An enjoyable read.

    Thank you for your entry...Sue


    • Ceridwens Soul silver member
      June 13, 2008
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      I'm lucky I live close to both Avebury Circle and Stonehenge, the Solstices are so magical.

      Jem


      • malmadre gold member
        June 13, 2008

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        Ah! to live in such a mystical place must bring all these wonderful verses to you. The first verse brings the scene to life..

        • Ceridwens Soul silver member
          June 13, 2008
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          It is a great honour to live here and for both my painting and my writing the stones of Avebury and Stonehenge are powerful sources of inspiration. Something drew me to Wiltshire and I think I am beginning to find just what that something was. Thank you for your comment.

          Jem

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