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Love Still Lingers in my Mind part 2

Missing image
You're in my head
why
I miss your voice
why
I miss our friendship
why
You promised, it was a lie
why

Questions in my head
when will it stop
I tucked you away
in a locked room
so as not to think of you
anymore, but here you are

A best friend
one I loved
sent me an email
to FUCK OFF

I did nothing
you promised
to be here for me
it was all a lie

Was it time to move on
to another one
maybe I was just a game
since it was only online

FUCK THIS
and FUCK YOU
god I hate
missing you

~Lady Raven-vampira1665~

Author notes

More bullshit.
Written December 30th, 2003

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  • Lady Patricia
    September 25, 2004
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    goddamn. As you well know missus,
    I base all of my poetry on emotion. If the reader has felt the words that have been scribbled down my work is done. This is oneo f those writes-- course i didnt write it. i like the repition when you ask why because when one thinks about heartbreak and just.. so many questions, the word whyu just constantly pops up. why why why why...
    but your last stanza sums up the inner turmoil you're induring.
    fuck this
    fuck you
    and
    god i hate missing you...
    goodness missus,
    its perfection
    with a cool
    background
    good job
    trisha


  • ImYourLover
    December 30, 2003
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    Sorry about your pain m'lady...Wish it all away...
    xxxCarl