Take my hand please hold it loosely
Worry not for you’ll not fall
I will guide you my dear safely
As lovers sleep their hearts do call
Please come with me upon this night
Together we will sail the sky
Steering by a romantic light
For our passions we’ll not deny
Drifting upon the magic below
Carried along on dreamers seas
For with their fantasies we will flow
Far above the swaying trees
Wafting along with fleets of clouds
Silent escorts along the way
Where in their darkness well enshroud
We’ll steal a kiss without delay
Buoyed by song our hearts are singing
As we traverse lover’s cosmos
Entwining bodies gladly clinging
Who knows how far our love can go
A contest entry
- AMAZE ME!!!!! by Sue Cardwell.
1000 points, ended June 18, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow... This is awesome!!! You did a great job on this one!!! I really enjoyed it!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
this is very beautiful
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Why thank you!
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that was a very cute love poem...
Steering by a romantic light
For our passions we’ll not deny
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Thanks maggy! Its nice to meet you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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A lovely romantic flight through the wonderful land of dreams. Good luck in the contest, this was a lovely read.
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Thanks freckles! Just in a good mood lately!
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Thank you for this beautiful entry in the contest, it was a joy to read.
All the best...Sue
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My pleasure sue! This was deja vu or something! I had just finished writing it and was going to post it but decided to look through the contests first. It was meant to be I think. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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