I find myself lost within his pain,
to understand this creature of worldly
debts is at times beyond me for I never give in.
Yet it's what pulls me in, the dark of greed.
For under this front is the man I see,
how perfect behind his ever growing sin.
I closed my eyes and with a brush of emotion
he kissed me with tainted lips.
Tears fall like rain in the month of June,
I cry, I slap him across the face.
"Why do you have to be a fucking fool?
within that one kiss can't you see how
much I really do love you?"
I left my heart to pain,
for a kiss.
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One who can not look into themselves, their past, their future, will never grow. Everybody is somebody on the inside, but their actions will always speak louder than what one will see.
He is a fool, to see what is past and what is present, but not willing to change what is future.
Well done, you deserve more.
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A kiss to fall the tears so easy sent.
The pain forgot a moment, and it spent.
And all the past to fall away,
To remember love in another day.
For better or for worse the echo sounds.
The heart it flighted by its pain.
But ever love resounds!
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This is a wonderful comment. A poem of it's own. Thank you.
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My pleasure Atrina, may your light shine, and your heart never be taken for granted.
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hi, u r really good wen it comes to describe ur inner feelings.. As I say quite often, hope never comes with a dim light.. wen u dnt expect, BOOM! it strikes u! keep it up mate.
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A kiss can cost a life of tears
A slow remorse to last for years
But love that's real will rise again
For love that's true is not just pain
So look inside your heart and know
In all good time true love will grow.
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