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Kisses in the wind

The days are shorter
Now that I've found out
My end is near
there is no doubt

The doctor said you may be saved
Though it may only delay...

The inevitable disclosure
To your loved ones
The ones who'll cry
and miss you when you're gone

I don't begrudge this ending
of the journey so great
per God's will it is my fate

May all my family and friends remember 
that I leave behind my thoughts and love

When they step out to live their lives
and need someone who isn't there

Just close your eyes and feel my
Kisses in the wind....

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  • Judith Chandler
    June 12, 2008

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    That's beautiful. I would like to think that of a few of my friends who have stepped away from us.

    Kisses in the wind. Yes, that would be nice.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    Thank you for this beautiful and poignant entry.

    All the best in the contest...Sue


  • sassylilpoet silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    this write is so sad, and if this be reality, may you find comfort in knowing that it is God's will.

    Blessings,
    Sassy

    • robmblind
      June 20, 2008
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      thanks

      Just wanted to thank you for your comment, Yes I have a brain aneurysm and am on the wait and see plan....

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