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Two Leaves



Windswept we meet as two leaves brushing close
I feel your breath on my face,
soft sugared raindrops alight on my lips
sacred this moment, this place.

Love truly blessed as our love surely is
only the wind intercedes,
lost in your eyes as they reflect my own
knowing our wants and our needs.

Treasured fond kiss that we snatch from the wind
knowing that this is our last,
holding forever one moment in time
soon to melt into the past.

Soft blossoms blown gently fall to the ground
sadness is scattered not bliss,
fickle the breeze that can pull love apart
stealing our one final kiss.








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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Thank you Hilly, this is an amazing poem and one of your best. It is beautiful with a tinge of sadness as is any sort of finality.

    Love
    you
    Suz
    xxx


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 15, 2008
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    Thank you for this beautiful entry in my contest and good luck in my contest...Sue