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The Block!

There I slept
There I dreamed
But my mind kept
The words from me

To describe what I saw
To say how I felt

This is writers block
Nothing more nothing less
I'll just take a shoot
And hope for the best

Maybe it will rhyme
And flow like time

So I just take a chance
What can it hurt
Like the first time I danced
And I hit the dirt

Author notes

lol, well the first time i danced this really did happen. and dont worry, everyone gets writters block. just look around at the world, friends, family, and life in general. youll come up with something.

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  • HeavensDaughter
    August 13, 2008
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    I loved this! I liked the way it flowed and it just really seemed to fit the subject matter.


  • Dreamana
    June 13, 2008

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    Some years ago I tried to learn ballroom dancing, my first lesson was also my last! Poor teacher This time however, I refuse to quit! It is quite clear that you have been through this before.

    Thank you for your entry.


    • ShadowsDream
      June 19, 2008
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      hey thanks, and yeah, i went through something like that. i tried to learn this song on guitar and i just couldnt get it right so i quit playin for a while, i picked it back up a month later and i got it down! its a great feeling.