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Wordz Frozed ~ Neo Soul Poetry ~

Wordz Frozed

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

Hello world,

As I walk outside

And grin at pride

That has flown away

With the jaybird

1960 Ford Thunder Bird

And the strong male fragrance

Curve is a stench

That gets on my nerves.

 

My poetry is slurring

As my thoughts are drunk

And sub zero cold.

 

But it has been a long day

And numb immortals

Haven’t still quite thawed out yet.

 

But when I hit the world road

Of same whores

With many different clothes

Boy I tell you ,

I U- turn off the grimy muddy

And be the best of buddies

With Revelations because

When I tell you each word

Is a lesson to the destruction

Of the world you praise

Because each soul carries

Strife and unrighteous

In their womb.

 

Its now late in the afternoon

And your brain is still full of gibberish

Cartoons of what spiritual being created me?

 

Well what ever spirit that you believe

Conceived your destiny of life

Is what you should

Follow and teach your offspring’s.

 

Because a dingle ling

Can feel good

And make you feel like you

Should as he jig

And makes you snatch

The wig off your weak lid

You’re pregnant with

Who is the baby daddy of my kid.

 

But your having contractions with

A mistake so its to late to renege.

But my words are slurring to a hard head

Instead of following mead to get a education

On life
you blow me off with the winds

Destroying the flying kite

Of what I been seeing

In the twinkling

Soul of what I write.

 

 

 

Julia L. Clark - Herring

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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Wordz Frozed ~ Neo Soul Poetry ~

Yes I have on my neo soul heels today
Thanks ~ Mrs. Neo Soul Red Cat ~

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  • I really enjoyed this. It is much deeper, and multi-layered than first appearances. And I notice some people don't even know how to make intelligent comments. Of course, I re-read this 6 times looking for mis spellings LOL. This is excellent. Just wish I could hear it aloud.


  • secberm
    June 13
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    Well, sweets... I'm here as a request. Honestly, I get the gist, the content. And I can guess where this is drawn from.

    Now as far as I'm concerned, if they don't get it, then they don't get it. BUT when communicating, I DO try to do THAT effectively, correctly.

    Dez

  • i like this hon its funny i read this because my sister the only one i have is sitting up 4 months preag. by some immature guy i am going to print this i liked it

  • i love this i think you really did a great job
    penning this here everyone always going to have
    a opinion ma keep doin it ya boi d


  • blueyez
    June 13

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    I think your writing would be much improved if it were more literate. You have many misspellings and words that just don't make sense. I understand slang, and I understand ebonics but ummm...
    • this usually happen when wanna b's want to be down and don't really understand hood style just because they may have had a little darkness up there tails before but how ever hon thank you for such a lovely kind insult but it would have been more nastier icing to the cake if you would have been more coherent and left what you so call said were misspellings I had on this spoken piece poem now dont you think?

      Take Care

  • Swangrnv
    June 12

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    BRAVO!

    A boisterous and loud chant emanating from my lips...RAH RAH RAH! Right on with your neo soulful self!

    • you reall think this was loaded with energy huh roughness And wildness it's me on the cheeks thanks

  • cep2008
    June 12
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    A deeper shade of soul

    I like.

  • kennethlaney
    June 12

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    Very Good

    I like that for some reason, Kind of remind me of this hot ass summer weather we are having,of days gone by when I was a kid chasing the little HOOCHIE MAMMAS around!

    • lol thanks kenny this belive it are not came from i have not a clue its just came
      out that way i had mortal kombat in my mind
      i don't know weird thanks hon
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