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I love you

See her there in her submission
waitng for my determination
of what to do and how
to bring her to that completion

As i look upon her, I feel the honor
of love and trust, to take the things
the spanks the bites or pricks thru her

I love you
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox
Master

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  • Warrior7
    June 14, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi robmblind

    This sounds like a master and slave sort of scenario. Great little poem sounds like she is submissive to your needs.
    Keep writing

    Andy - Site Greeter


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    June 12, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Oohhhhh. Cutting edge there.
    I love the form and how it expresses
    the content.

    This could mean several things.
    Interestingly obscure.
    Thank you.

    • robmblind
      June 12, 2008
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      Thanks for your input

      I know it was a short poem. This was something I just sent to my "Kitten" to let her know how much she means to me. I am not a writer at all... as is plain to see