She's There,
Incase I wonder off,
He's scarred,
Cuz I wondered off,
She's There,
Incase I wonder off,
He's scarred,
Cuz I,
All in all my tred is slow,
Burn marks on the skin all in a row,
The blood in begins to flow,
In there,
I shiver cold,
Out here,
I feel old,
In there,
I shiver cold,
Out here,
I feel,
All in all my tred is slow,
Burn marks on the skin all in a row,
The blood in begins to flow,
All in all my tred is slow,
Burn marks on the skin all in a row,
The blood in begins to flow,
Comments
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wonder needs to be wander. scarred needs to be scared.
This is an interesting piece. Flows very much like a song.
I want an image though. Something to ground this poem.
Like where the blood came from. What exactly is going on.
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