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One Last Chance

You tell me in the morning your going away
That your life with me is about to end and cannot stay.
But before you go can I get one last chance as we engage in one last dance.
One last chance to hold you in my arms, to feel your warm body up against mine, feasting on me as you dig in and dine.
Please give me one last chance to tell you how much I love you, before you fade away and go.
Give me the chance to lay next to you, hearing the beautiful sounds of your wonderful heart beat.
As you lay next to me in your time of dying...Gods I don't want to start crying!
But I can't help it, so please before you go on and advance into the next life.
Can I get one more chance?

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  • patsoldcat
    June 13, 2008

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    nice poem

    very deep and lots of emotion in this poem
    i hope that there is one more chance.
    lots of luck in the contest.


  • rainyday woman silver member
    June 13, 2008

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    This is indeed an interesting take on the picture prompt. Thank you for entering this piece and good luck in the contest and in all you endeavor in live.
    Cheryl